Hi rl_gallear,

I came across your work after reading the title. The poem didn't turned out to be what I had in mind.
I was thinking of some sad poem but it turned out to be a comical relief. Great work there.

Most of the people can relate to the scenarios you put forth. They are all very common and yes, they do provide a relief to us.

"Now this poem is ending.
Oh the relief!" This line made me smile and just think of how exhausting it gets sometimes for a writer a finish his/her work which they very enthusiastically started.

Great work there.
keep writing.

Shivay



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