Hi Fiona Read ,

I read your poem "Leave Me " . The title has a nice appeal to it but as per your context it sounds a bit like an order rather than a polite plea.

A bit work is needed in the punctuation.
But other than that the poem is very good.

As I read the poem I couldn't help but think of an introvert person saying the words. For introverts it is very crucial to spend time alone. It helps them recharge themselves and think, about matters that may not have much importance for others but they tend to overindulge in such thoughts.
I, myself, am an introvert so I can relate to it.

You did a good work and it has a lot of potential to it too.

Keep writing.

Shivay





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