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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost*I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Two young people are haunted by the ghosts they carry with them all the time. Sometimes the scariest things come from within our own thoughts, minds and imaginings. You do a good job of showing this, while showing the developing relationship between the characters Katarina and Daniel.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I liked the ending where they comfort each other. I liked that a lot. I think our parents while they are living influence us and even more with thoughts and dreams after they have passed on. You have crafted a fine story using your imagination.

Nicely done!

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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*SometHiNg*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read and today's judge in the Writer's Cramp. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I do what I enjoy here. If I didn't enjoy reading the entries, I wouldn't volunteer to be a judge. I do lots of reviews because I enjoy reading. If I didn't enjoy reading here, I'd do it elsewhere. Find what you enjoy and stick with it and you will have a good time. I enjoyed visiting with you!

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