What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

I saw your poem featured in this week's Poetry Newsletter and came to read. Congratulations on being selected to be in the Newsletter!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

I think this poem explores the struggle between faith, (or lack thereof) fate and destiny. There is a frustration at trying to overcome that which seems to be preordained.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I especially liked this part:


"If I could only storm that place,

To rend the chains which guide my hands;

And from that task, return with grace,

My feet again on earthly sands,"

There is a vulnerability in this part that I found entrancing.




THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

SometHiNg

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. With regard to poetry, I look for a section that moves me in the sense that the use of language is eloquent and unexpected (by me anyway). I enjoy myself as I hunt for things that move me along my reading journeys. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

END OF SometHiNg

Ta Ta until we meet again....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"