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Review of Camping Joy  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I love how you responded to this prompt! You took the viewpoint of kids playing with their food, and then wrote so creatively. I laughed at the absurd idea of meatballs as tires to be rolled and used as toys. Yes, butter as a slip and slide is possible. I really laugh at the idea of brussels sprouts as being only good enough as catapult fare. I see one tiny typo: 'marshmellow' is 'marshmallow'. It is pronounced as if it's an 'e'. though. You have a whimsical, fun writing style, and this piece showcased your vivid imagination.
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