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by A Guest Visitor
Review of The Old Maple  
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Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

It's plain to see,
you cherish this tree.
It's life is not in vain,
for in your lines the heart is retained.

Form and structure are firmly formed.
Rhyming is consistent and adds a melodious timber.
Flow is as smooth as the lines you create.
Pace is slow and dance worthy. You deserve an eighty-eight!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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