Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Proud of you for wanting to make changes for the good of others.
so many bucket lists are centered upon self, yours is for others.
There is compassion and caring, the two main emotional tags the reader feels.
Form and structure are consistent and that's a good thing.
Rhyming is sublime and adds a melody to the piece.
Flow is so smooth and remarkably grammatically snafu free.
Pace is slow, as the reader absorbs; and perhaps identifies with the things on your bucket list.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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