Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Hands to be noticed,
hands to be respected and cared for.
Thank you for your hands,
which have touched so many.
That's imagery that captivates the reader.

Form and structure are strong.
Prosaic and yet so much like a dance of life within.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is graceful and slow.
Grammatically snafu free, thanks for caaring and sharing in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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