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 I Want to Sing My Life, But How Can I?  [E]
I want to sing my life, but I fail to do so because someone stole my heart.
by Nobody
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Nobody:

You are somebody,
why the chosen handle?
You write from the heart,
that;'s the best part.

Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and rhythmical.
Pace is slow and sensory filled,
chock full of sensory tags to keep the readers attention from stem to stern.
Now that's imagery that makes a piece; like a good book; hard to put down.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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