Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Bam!
You nailed the feeling of springs new birth.
Form and structure are like the lines of a song.
Rhyming adds to that feeling.
Flow is smooth and not too slow.
Pace is like there is a spring in your step,
after all it is a fine spring time piece.
Grammatically, nary a jot nor tittle is out of place.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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