Found your piece in Spiritual Newseltter 04-08-15
I often peruse the NLs to garner reviewing opportunities.
Your piece closes out the pages of this NL.

First impression: Title seems generic, then the blurb brings into focus.
Dominant feeling = melancholy.
Form and structure are clear.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is rapid, and yet full of details that endears the reader to the characters walk.
Grammatically speaking; your piece is pristine. That's a plus 3 any day of the wwek.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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