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 Beyond  [18+]
A young man's complex mind brought about a mysterious book.
by Leeghwater
Review of Beyond  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 4-8-15
I often peruse the NLs for reviewing fodder.

Imagery keeps the readers attention.
Emotional roller coaster is how this feels.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu clean.
Pace is slow and detail filled.


Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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