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Review of Yellow  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I'm not normally a reader of flash horror. But what I read I really liked. I loved the imagery that you used, and that last line clinches it. I love the way you made her helpless against drowning. At the end I felt a pang of horror for her. Good Job
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