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A Pot of Gold (or 'Yellow'?)  [13+]
You may not look at a 'Pot of Gold' the same after this limerick!
by Cub-bee
Review by Charlie ~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, Cub-bee . My name is Charlie and I'm happy to be reviewing your poem today. Thank you for sharing with us and giving me the opportunity to write this review. Keep in mind that the following is just the personal opinion of one reader. I am not a professional. I hope that you'll find something worthwhile and helpful here. If you don't, feel free to dismiss this completely. *Snowman*


*Laugh* *Laugh* This was a good one. I totally didn't see that ending coming. I've never written a limerick before, but I remember learning the style in English class when I was in middle school. Aren't they always funny like this, or was everything just funny when I was thirteen? *Rolleyes* I love how you set up the atmosphere with detailed descriptions of the setting. Just because a poem is funny, doesn't mean it shouldn't build up to the end.


The title is perfectly connected with the ending. I love that the bar is called the "Rainbow Saloon". Every part of the poem resonates with an Irish theme. Even the font is green. It's an awesome St. Patrick's Day tribute. You should make a sequel this year! *Laugh* We were left in such suspense with this one. What happens after the golden cheer! *Bigsmile*

Thanks for sharing your poem with us, Cubby. I can see why it's one of your favorites! I'll see you over in 30DBC.


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