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 The Epiphany  [E]
A short story, based on true events.
by Burney
Review of The Epiphany  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I was in a forum that encourages positive reviewing.
Seeing this among it's posts, I clicked through and found this.
Form and structure are efficient.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow ans the scene unfolds.
Emotionally the reader feels the sadness, the pain, the realization.
No visible grammatical snafu's is a plus!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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