Hi there Valery Black ! "Gasp!" your being reviewed by a newbie! I am reviewing

When there is nothing to say on a topic  (E) When there is nothing to say on topic is one of my favorite poems #1966462 by Valery Black

Personal Impression Interesting way to say nothing. I like the imagery and the montage of illusions your trying to portray as life on planet earth.
Tone & Mood I had trouble with tone and mood because there was nothing to say. (lol sorry I couldn't resist.)
Rhyme, Form & Flow Since this is free style I'm looking for it to rhyme but I do expect it to have a rythem as you read it which it does. It flows well but I'm not qualified to tell you if it fits the form or not on this poem.
Emotional Impact I found this poem fun and a good read. I enjoyed your illusions as well how to added todays technology into your pictures. Yes it had emotional impact and was very well written.
Grammar/Punctuation Since the author controls where and how it breaks and stops. It very hard to tell a run-on from a short sentence since there all short. What I judge it by, is does any part stick out. Or does it read wrong. Nothing was out of place and it actually was easy to follow and pick up the vision the author had. Good job!

Please remember that you are best judge of what is right for your poem Whatever another person says -- especially me -- whether positive or negative, is just their opinion You are the only one who can decide what is right for your poetry.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this piece. Please keep on writing more things just like this!






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