wonderful story. well written. noerrors noted. excellent descriptions of the anticipation, fear, determination, of the character. She too the chance for hehrself and freed herself to do other things; i wish i had done that when I could (the last series of The Biggest Loser" on American television broke so many emotional fears by having the participants fall from top of a building, safely). So the young people of New Zealand find a river to do exactly what American kids do: swim, daredevil moments, fearful moments, fun. Your description of the river makes it so real, no doubts or confusion, great description. Thank you for this. ann

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