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Given: Mar 25, 2013 at 4:06am
Length: 850 Characters |
817 w/o WritingML
Hi Fi. I found this item in the "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed" . Please note that these words represent my views as a reader and are not meant to offend in any manner.
I am very glad that I found the reason for your username. I have wondered many times why did you select "flea" as your identity. Your Uncle Tim feels like a character. The short experience you stated above gives the insight in the living around farms. I am a city-girl and learning about hay-biffing and electric fences was interesting.
I did not find any grammatical or technical mistake in the piece.
The only answer I did not find was how did "Fee" originate in the first place. That answer would have completed the story.
But, the name our loved-ones give to us are those which stick with us forever. May you be called "flea" with lots of love ever and ever.
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