Hi Fi . I found this item in the "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed" . Please note that these words represent my views as a reader and are not meant to offend in any manner.

I am very glad that I found the reason for your username. I have wondered many times why did you select "flea" as your identity. Your Uncle Tim feels like a character. The short experience you stated above gives the insight in the living around farms. I am a city-girl and learning about hay-biffing and electric fences was interesting.
I did not find any grammatical or technical mistake in the piece.
The only answer I did not find was how did "Fee" originate in the first place. That answer would have completed the story.

But, the name our loved-ones give to us are those which stick with us forever. May you be called "flea" with lots of love ever and ever.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .