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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I've chosen to review this entry for the 30 Day Blogging Challenge, day 20. This is by far my favorite entry, it really stands out. The grammar, at times, is raw and I think a few words have been misplaced and the whole piece could do with a proof read BUT it paints such a vivid and personal picture of your family life and your familial love. There's a real sense of easy joy tha speaks to me because Im a father of young children and this could be my future, it charms me because at 36 and 63 respectively, my mother and I still like to just watch late night TV together when we hang out, comfortable in our company. It's a very blogglish blog entry and hits all the right buttons.
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