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This is your entry for my blogging prompt: If the Zombie Apocalypse occurred right this second, what would you use to protect yourself? In your response, you stated that you'd more than likely end up dead; I'd have to agree. The items you mentioned are far from adequate for killing zombies. When it comes to zombie killing- target the head; either remove it or destroy the brain. There are some items which will better your odds, which are fairly cheap and easy to get, as well as easy to use- a screwdriver, a crowbar, and maybe a sidewalk ice scraper. Get those, and your odds of survival should increase from 0% to around 50%.

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Best of luck with the rest of the contest.

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