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This is your entry for my Blogging prompt: What would you do to protect yourself if the Zombie Apocalypse occurred right now? It seems that your main defense would be to run. That is a smart idea, however, zombies never tire. You also said you'd buy a shotgun- change that to Acquire- covers all other possible ways of getting one- beg, borrow, steal, and so on. You also mentioned that you're not much of a gun person- get a crowbar, as it's lightweight, strong enough to bash in skulls, and it can be used for what it was designed for, opening up crates of supplies. Your chance of survival- Less than 50%.

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Best of luck with the rest of the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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