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Oct 14, 2023 at 10:21pm
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Re: My Villain is a "Caddy Shacker"!
Cool beans. It certainly does put him as the highlight. Mine is one long paragraph still with internal view. His heartbreak and what he wanted. Yours plays out nicely.

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My Villain is a "Caddy Shacker"! · 10-14-23 9:35pm
by Patata Aterrdora en NM
*Star* Re: My Villain is a "Caddy Shacker"! · 10-14-23 10:21pm
by Angelica Weatherby-Fallishere
Re: Re: My Villain is a "Caddy Shacker"! · 10-14-23 11:26pm
by Patata Aterrdora en NM
Re: My Villain is a "Caddy Shacker"! · 10-15-23 12:20am
by Riverd0g
Re: Re: My Villain is a "Caddy Shacker"! · 10-15-23 5:04pm
by BrandiwynšŸŽ¶
Re: Re: Re: My Villain is a "Caddy Shacker"! · 10-15-23 6:34pm
by Riverd0g

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