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Oct 8, 2023 at 10:53pm
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Re: Didn't Turn Out So Well...
OKAY - so I read your work. First concern - where is she going? Where is there a bus line that still works that picks up handicapped people? Have you researched that? I don't know of any around me, but then I live in Montana where there is no bus line anywhere I am aware of.

Other than those questions, pretty interesting interaction and conversation.

NJ

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