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Sep 18, 2022 at 1:24pm
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Edited: September 22, 2022 at 12:33pm
Re: Commentary: "Helping Him Helping You"
by Seuzz
"Helping Him Helping You gives the sequel to the last chapter, with more interaction between Will and the new doppelganger; it also works more deeply at the ideas I talked about in the post above, that Will himself is operating under the personality of a self-conscious "doppelganger" without realizing it.

There's a poll with this chapter, though like the last one it's not meant to determine the story's direction, only to poll readers on what choice they would make in Will's place with his motives. At least three of the choices (Kelsey, Charles, and Gary) are ones that were suggested in this thread, so here's another spot where they get worked in. A fourth choice is a variation on the Gary Chen choice. The Jonathan Straussler choice is a natural suggestion coming from Doppel-Patterson.

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Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-25-22 12:05pm
by Seuzz
Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-25-22 1:05pm
by Zuul
Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-25-22 5:41pm
by rugal b.
Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-25-22 6:38pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-25-22 7:21pm
by Nostrum
Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-25-22 9:34pm
by rugal b.
Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-25-22 10:58pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-25-22 10:10pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 8:30am
by Zuul
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 1:09pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 8:07pm
by Zuul
Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 2:10pm
by rugal b.
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 2:20pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 3:26pm
by Seuzz
Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 2:31am
by bori258
Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 8:31am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 1:41pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 1:57pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 2:02pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 8:35pm
by Zuul
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-27-22 1:02am
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-27-22 3:41am
by rugal b.
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-27-22 8:40am
by Zuul
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-27-22 11:17am
by T.G.Almeida
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War... · 08-27-22 12:39pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The... · 08-27-22 1:09pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger:... · 08-28-22 6:06am
by Masktrix
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelgan... · 08-28-22 10:41am
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "Thanks Aloft" · 09-15-22 12:15pm
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "Three-Point Shot" · 09-17-22 1:41pm
by Seuzz
*Star* Re: Commentary: "Helping Him Helping You" · 09-18-22 1:24pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Commentary: "Helping Him Helping You" · 09-19-22 4:15am
by imaj
Re: Re: Re: Commentary: "Helping Him Helping You" · 09-19-22 4:55am
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: "Helping Him Helping You" · 09-19-22 8:24am
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "The Gossip Girl" · 09-19-22 1:33pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Commentary: "The Gossip Girl" · 09-21-22 12:24am
by bori258
Re: Commentary: "Stormy Weather" · 09-21-22 2:06pm
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "Music and the Savage Beast" · 09-22-22 12:39pm
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "Tacos" and "Trade" · 09-24-22 12:56pm
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "Jumping Jack" · 09-25-22 12:26pm
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "A Gang of Seven" · 09-26-22 11:55am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Commentary: "A Gang of Seven" · 09-27-22 2:59am
by zenkichi11
Re: Re: Re: Commentary: "A Gang of Seven" · 09-27-22 1:15pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: "A Gang of Seven" · 09-28-22 12:15pm
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "Day" and "Night" · 09-28-22 12:19pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Commentary: "Day" and "Night" · 09-28-22 12:37pm
by T.G.Almeida
Re: Re: Re: Commentary: "Day" and "Night" · 09-28-22 1:09pm
by Seuzz
Re: Commentary: "The Next Phase" · 09-29-22 11:50am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Commentary: "The Next Phase" · 09-29-22 2:31pm
by T.G.Almeida
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-27-22 8:08am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-27-22 12:25pm
by Easy
Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 8:43am
by Zuul
Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 9:20am
by Zuul
Re: Re: Re: Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 1:41pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 08-26-22 1:24pm
by Easy
Re: Doppelganger: The War Game · 10-02-22 12:50pm
by Nirro

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