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Sep 4, 2020 at 7:45am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM.
by Seuzz
> OF COURSE THE BOOK WAS COMING BACK TO WILL.

Sure, I guess. But one of the things I really liked about this 15-chapter arc was that it never felt predictable. There is no reason that any of the other choices have to circle back to Will (though some might circle back to him earlier than this one did), so Will's appearance didn't feel inevitable—

Until he did show up, and then JM's aside about him "owing" her felt like a Chekov gun that had just, inevitably, fired.

BTW, I think that's an important point to make about that overused trope. Chekov guns must be fired; but something isn't a Chekov gun until it fires. Until that point, it might must be part of the scenery. A lot of genre fiction would be more satisfying if writers didn't put their Chekov guns in a display case with the label CHEKOV GUN underneath it. This arc handled it just right.
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JM. · 09-03-20 9:45am
by thatdude
Re: JM. · 09-03-20 11:33am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 3:05pm
by imaj
Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 3:53pm
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 4:26pm
by imaj
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 4:50pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 5:14pm
by Masktrix
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 5:16pm
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 5:18pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 5:19pm
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 5:32pm
by imaj
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 5:39pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 5:49pm
by Masktrix
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-03-20 6:34pm
by rugal b.
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-04-20 3:58am
by Masktrix
*Star* Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-04-20 7:45am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: JM. · 09-04-20 8:17am
by Masktrix

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