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A place to request in-depth reviews of your novel's opening chapter ONLY. Any genre/rating
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Sep 17, 2018 at 12:46am
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Re: Re: SUBMISSION
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Thank you for the very helpful review. I'll edit to get the pacing better and reconstruct some sentences.
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SUBMISSION · 09-11-18 6:01pm
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Re: SUBMISSION · 09-16-18 6:22pm
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Re: Re: Re: SUBMISSION · 09-17-18 1:59am
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