*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/forums/message_id/2939999
Rated: E · Message Forum · Writing · #2076004
Hear WDC poets read their poems aloud
<< Previous  •  Message List  •  Next >>
Reply  •  Post New
Feb 25, 2016 at 4:08pm
#2939999
Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last"
by Cinn
Well, the inflection changed more than the pace... Emphasis not pausing. But the words themselves dictate flow more than anything else. You pause for punctuation, but how long do you really pause when listing something? Like... "I need to get eggs, milk, bread"? It wouldn't sound good to pause forever, but a half beat longer than normal would make it more dramatic

Spaces that
             ripple
                   outward like that also tend to flow smoothly... One leading to another. But again, it depends on what the words are. Slow, smooth, lovely... Those three would be slower than slip, slide, gone. Really, I guess word choice and tone and placement and punctuation... They all matter a bit.

Plus, I read this sorta fast in general. *Blush* It's like... A sweet-talker sales pitch that's over too fast, if you know what I mean. I debated just flying through it for effect, but not for the very first recording. *Rolling*

Anyway, I'll do some more.



The Newbie Research Center  [E]
Gathering information to improve the experiences of people new to WDC.
by Cinn

MESSAGE THREAD
Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 2:02am
by Cinn
Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 2:34am
by ROSΣANNΣ|NaPoWriMo|WGT|JDI
Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 2:39am
by Cinn
Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 2:47am
by ROSΣANNΣ|NaPoWriMo|WGT|JDI
Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 4:05am
by Elle - on hiatus
Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 5:24am
by Cinn
Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 3:20pm
by Elle - on hiatus
*Star* Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 4:08pm
by Cinn
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies Last" · 02-25-16 4:15pm
by Elle - on hiatus
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Supplies ... · 02-25-16 6:01pm
by Sally
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Suppl... · 02-25-16 6:09pm
by Elle - on hiatus
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While S... · 02-25-16 6:35pm
by Fivesixer
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While Suppl... · 02-25-16 6:18pm
by Cinn
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While S... · 02-25-16 6:40pm
by Sally
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Poetry Reading - "While S... · 02-25-16 7:16pm
by intuey

The following section applies to this forum item as a whole, not this individual post.
Any feedback sent through it will go to the forum's owner, Elle - on hiatus.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/forums/message_id/2939999