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Oct 21, 2015 at 6:59pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Pesky Words
by Noyoki
Her voice rose above the rest like a dove busting free from its cage; each note a shining bell amidst the clang of common pots.

That's a bit more wordy, but I think it draws a picture of she sang beautifully pretty well.

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