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Oct 10, 2014 at 8:26pm
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Re: Re: Re: Chapter ordering
Even with that information, I think I'd still rather see the wife's scene first. We open with the unknown: Did he make it? We switch to husband and think, ooh, maybe he does make it! And then you leave us hanging again...

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Michelle
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Chapter ordering · 10-10-14 7:44pm
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Re: Chapter ordering · 10-10-14 8:12pm
by Professor Q
Re: Chapter ordering · 10-10-14 8:14pm
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Re: Re: Chapter ordering · 10-10-14 8:17pm
by Odessa Molinari
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