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Jun 22, 2009 at 1:00am
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Re: Fantastical Fights
by A Non-Existent User
It depends on a few things like your grammar. LOL. When writing action scenes. Remember our sentences are short and you write action first in a sentence. I'm not much of a talker when it comes to writing to say, this and that. I'm a visual learner, so when I review I show you by examples. If you want, email me and tell me what piece you would like to have reviewed and I will help you. Meanwhile, to have an idea how writing action sounds like, check out my mini tale:
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Fantastical Fights · 06-21-09 11:57pm
by Clarified Chaos
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