okay
looing back trough I noticed you telling adnante and ether Kai or Virgo (cant remember which now) that they should talk. So I compared their guesses and they used th same rhyming pairs. So I reckon that they are just in the wrong order.
so lets try....
to quench the fumes of war
seek the aid of those not men
else evil triumphant will ascend
and rule forever more
as still winter grips its icy hand
then come hunting that ancient lore
deaths wind shall blow once more
when spring comes upon the land
when silver bells sing
while bluebells grow
where once fell the final blow
life once more will spring
and if you should fall
remember you almost had it all
again, the two pieces in the second stanza might go the other way around.
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