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Review To: Marshall
Reviewed Anonymously?: No!
Review Time: 07-03-05 @ 12:00pm
Review's Rating: 5.0
Review Length: 1,251 Characters
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CONGRATULATIONS!!! Your request for an item review has been granted by the super-reviewer, Spiral Kinetochore!


Hi! This is you friend K'neto, your friend and ever-supportive reviewer, with a very honest and in-depth feedback for your piece.

I enjoyed many parts here...

I liked the horserace spiel in the first part!

"long" and "time" > I realized a longtime ago that sometimes the shortest route is not a straight line.

I liked the "solitaire" part!

And also the "1-2 swig out the grug stew" thing... this is making me crazy!!!

Wow! I'll save all the other comments and harsh reactions for next. I wish you luck on this novel.

Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reviewing!

This has been K'neto, now spiralling down on your port.

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