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Jan 20, 2005 at 5:36pm
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Two Poems Need Feedback
 (This message was edited by sarama on 01-20-05 @ 5:39 pm EST)

Hello!

This isn't my first time stopping or visiting, but it is my first time posting work for the hope of getting feedback on it. I have two poems which are my firsts for actually, purposely, going into the Erotica realm, so I thought I'd post them here since I am a regular:

 Lover's New Moon  (GC)
And they stayed together underneath the lover's new moon...
#929810 by SB Musing


and

 Torture of Teasing  (GC)
I never knew I was such a tease... til' I met him, now, I do know.
#930033 by SB Musing



Any feedback is much appreciated! Thank you!

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Two Poems Need Feedback · 01-20-05 5:36pm
by SB Musing

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