Ten-Finger Exercises

What do you think?

I put a bunch of stories in my NoWriMo file, stories that had no endings or needed better endings. Here's one I put in the folder that I think is a strong story. I'm not at all sure that it needs a different ending though. I'm not sure it needs anything else; but maybe it does need more. I wrote it for a contest with a word limit. Maybe it needs more-- inside the story, not necessarily at the end of it. I want your opinion. What do you think? Do you understand it? Could I improve it some way?

Showdown  (18+) "This conversation will end badly for you." #1224299 by Wren