Poetic Referendum(s) On Life

wild-fire night

Wild words heaved like logs into our night fire.
Crackle, wild words; spark colorful fire light!
Pine twigs burn wild, glow rising fire higher,
spewing ash wild; dancing fire stirs our fright.
Bloom-flames white hot wild fire rages desire.
Drawn in lungs, heavy verses sung to air.
Oh, our stars! Flicker of flames lick each out!
'neath blanket, gray mist chill cannot despair
blackness in these blues crooning, I'm devout!


3.4.23
Neuvain (obscure poetry form, French?)
"The Neuvain." 

Explain my attempt?
Words 'wild' and 'fire' come together in first half of poem by line five, as a form of showing love and fire growing together. I did not want to use wildfire as the tired expression or as disaster.

Usage Note ▼

1- In most dialects, 'orange' is pronounced with two syllables. But in certain dialects of North American English, the vowel of the second syllable is deleted and the word is pronounced as one syllable. In such dialects, the two forms are generally allophonic.

perhaps, you do hear me differently than I intend/hear it myself?

Creation time total: two hours, three minutes
because I'm legally blind, prone to err.