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Rated: 18+ · Letter/Memo · Crime/Gangster · #2092871
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Charlotte's Hummock

p. 28-- loved visited leave it freely done without the word "and" between
p. 36 cat's ______ were (suspend the word "eyes")
p.'s where T'dby should be Td'by
p 65 mean't should be meant. only used wrong once where other times were correct
p. 96 "opened . should read "opened it."
p. 117 used before this correctly. the word accidentally is a typo and spelled accidently
p. 119 typo where "gypsy" is switched to "gyspy"





Charlotte's Autumn

p. 9 perhaps burned down quickly referrring to a candle should be the opposite and read burned down slowly
p. 9 swtich words angels and children
p. 10 "quotation mark after 1907)"
p. 14. comma after ;however,
p. 16 chg with whom to that
p. 16 change the temp from 57 to 67
p. 20 "sometimes," with a comma
p. 21 spelling of famile to famille in French
p. 27 change summer of '36 to '37
p. 32 "er, yes," change period to comma
p. 54 trusted," change period to comma
p. 55 trusted," change period to comma
p. 58 change the word fast to bold
p. 100 change the word letter to postcard
p. 127 add "but would be getting one next week"
p. 133 He was thirty-four years old. jumped a line and should be added after the first line in the paragraph
p. 136 now to know
p. 35 ninety-six to ninety-five
p. 100 the word through to threw
p. 71 they had drove to had driven because of correct way of using tense



Kit's Tryst

softcover--
sentimendary to sedimentary
from capitalizing Pennyroll to pennyroll
from blazer to capitalizing Blazer
thought to though
Hilary to Hillary
comma after Kit,", to no comma
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