My Fear

Tolentino,Rugile

Period 6

1/17/15

My Fear

There was a party in a hotel where this little boy's

birthday party was. His name was Charlie and he's 10

years old. It was quarter to ten past his bedtime and still eating junk food. His dad and mom didn't like each other much because of their divorce. So Charlie was kind of spoiled. Then his dad drove him home and charlie wasn't feeling so good after all the food he eat.



As Charlie wasn't feeling so good, so he ask his dad to take off his seat belt so he could feel a bit better. as soon as Charlie's seat belt was off, a truck crashed into them.



Charlie found himself in an empty hospital with no one there. Charlie thought it was a dream, but soon, he heard voices talking about him in a coma. His parents were so worried about him.



In this hospital, it's where young patients like Charlie live because of their problems like cancer or something else.

There's kids, Charlie's age that talked to him for any signs that he's still there. So one day Charlie blinked as a sign. And everyone in the hospital was so amazed.



So one day he came out of his coma and his parents came together because they wanted to keep better and healthy family. Charlie was treated with extra care and learned to have faith and to trust.