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Rated: XGC · Fiction · Adult · #1938611
Adult Contest entry for "Happy Birthday" on the Weekly Quickie
         Sitting at the table with her boyfriend in a gourmet restaurant, Ari is miserable. She can sense Joe doesn’t want to be there, and what’s worse – with her. They barely speak and all she can think is “this is the worst birthday…” the waitress approaches, breaking her train of thought. She detects Ari’s unhappiness, and gives her a warm smile to try to lighten the mood. Their eyes locked for a moment, and Ari felt confused. There was something about her that lingered with Ari.

         “There aren't many people here and it’s pretty quiet” Ari states, while Joe chimes in “kind of dark too”. She hoped by this point in their relationship she would be getting engaged for her birthday, but she’s been seeing the signs -- this is the furthest thing from his mind. It breaks her heart because she already feels unworthy. Taking a deep breath, she plucks up the courage and decides to go for it; she asks him “Where is our relationship heading Joe?” He doesn’t look at her and lets out an annoyed sigh “We’re fine.” he replies gruffly without another word, even though she waits to see if he follows up with something else. After a few minutes of silence, she grows impatient. “I DESERVE more from you than ‘We’re fine!’” quivering angrily. “Forget it!” he removes his wallet, throws some money on the table and says “Let’s go!” “No! Why can’t you answer me?” she cries. The waitress off in the corner looks concerned, she feels terrible for her. “I don’t have an answer for you!” Joe replies coldly. “Do you even love me anymore?” she searches his face for some hope. He doesn’t answer. “What? Do you want to break up with me?” his expression changes and with that she gets her answer. “GO! Get the hell away from me!” He tries to grab her arm, she gets up from the table and runs to the ladies room with tears in her eyes…”Just go!” though she’s more angry than sad.

         A few minutes go by; Ari wonders if there are people out there who witnessed her embarrassment. She just wants to die. Popping her head out to scan the area, Joe isn’t in sight. “What an asshole” she murmurs under breath, but she does see the waitress who is looking compassionately at her. “Oh God, this is humiliating” she thinks as she comes right for her. “Are you okay?” she asks, leading her to a table in a back room used for private parties. Ari senses genuine concern from her and lets herself be led off.

         Coming back as quickly as she’d set off with a tray full of drinks; “Here, these are for you…” setting them in front of her, she downs the nearest one. She looks at the waitress, teary, “It’s my Birthday you know.” “That guy doesn’t deserve you.” she said brusquely, but quickly softens her tone pulling Ari closer. She gives Ari a long and much desired embrace in her vulnerable state. Sweetly she smiles, caressing Ari’s shoulder while gazing into her lost eyes, oddly she feels comforted, and surprisingly, a little excited.

         Without a word, the waitress slips under the tablecloth; stunned, Ari doesn’t quite realize what’s happening until she feels the waitresses warm hands moving up her legs, gently gliding up her thighs. Sensing the rush of her blood, she gasps “Oh God”. Slowly she runs her fingers further up tickling Ari’s soft skin, taking her time before peeling her pretty cream satin panties off. “What am I doing?” Ari thinks, but only barely as she feels the waitress intently spread her legs and almost immediately warm breath on her quickly moistened pussy. She hasn’t felt such excitement in a very long time, “What is happening?” she thinks. She immediately feels a warm, wet, flitting tongue that knows exactly what it’s doing. Holding the waitress’ head Ari relaxes, going with the moment and not caring whether there was anyone else in the place.

         Ari feels a tongue lap slowly from her bottom straight to her clit, warm, wet, darting and flitting, she feels such heat. Sensing her about to let go, the divine woman under the table slows Ari down by changing pace of her lapping to darting and flitting her hole, teasing her. Quivering, she tries moving her head back, but she’s insistent, Ari gives in again allowing the woman to take her to ecstasy at her will. Licking and slurping, she can feel Ari’s body react to her, she can feel her pulsing, and her desperate ache to let go. This woman decides to be merciful; it is Ari’s birthday after all. She swirls Ari’s clit with her tongue, then gently suckles it giving her such pleasure that she can take no more. Her insides explode in waves of heat and tremors, Ari’s body spasms uncontrollably. Blood rushing throughout her body, nipples erect. Having no control, she slides under the table into a puddle in her arms.

         Feeling a bit comatose, she faces the waitress with wonder and kisses her hard. “You’ve given me a very Happy Birthday, thank you. Now…let me attend to your tip.”
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