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Rated: 13+ · Fiction · Romance/Love · #1837853
on her 18th birthday she will be the only thing that will save her loved oned
I will tell you about HER first





Nicky was pretty. She had long black curly hair, blue eyes, beautiful light tan skin and



a perfect body. She didn't know her parents. She only knew that they were from cuba.



Even though she knew she was hispanic she was more american And she looked like it too.



Most poeple thought she was italian. Even though she was beautiful and had a rocking



body. She would always wear baggy clothes and never seem to care how she looked like. She



wasn't a girly girl. During the winter it was always baggy clothes and a hat covering her



hair and When she got to school she had her hair in a bun never showing off her curly



hair. That was winter but durring fall, spring and summer she was still a tom boy but she



always had on her baggy gothic pants with a shirt that only covered her chest. but always



had a baggy boys hoodie over it. She always had her hoodie half open and today that is



what she wore to school and dont forget her kick ass biker boots. The only thing girly



about her was that she always wore her eyeliner. thick on the top and a line on the



bottem. It made her eyes more blueer. Nicky was a geek in math and was considered one of



the guys. Most of the guys teased her for her love of anime, zombies and tumblr. oh and



homestuck.even though if she was pretty no guy has ever asked her out..... ...









part 1



She looked at the time. It was 4 am and she still wasn't tired.



She looked at her self in the mirror.



THE VOICE came back.......



¨LOOK AT YOUUUuuuu............YOU ARE PATHETICCCccc..... NO WONDER YOUR MOTHER LEFT



YOU IN THIS DUMPPPPppp...... YOU HAVE NO ONEEEEeee!!! WHY ARE YOU STILL HEREEEEeee?!



YOU'RE SO UGLYYYYyyy.... NO ONE AT SCHOOL EVEN KNOWS YOUUUUuuu.... YOU'RE NOTHINGGGggg!!!



YOU'RE DISGUSTINGGGGGgggg.....¨



All she heard was THAT VOICE shouting at her... she covered her ears but it kept going



on. She look up and saw that her reflection was shouting those words of hatred. Her



reflection was laughing at her.



A horrible laugh that stabbed her ears. Her reflection looked possessed by some monster.



She couldn't take it anymore. She punched the mirror. The bathroom was a mess of



shattered glass and her blood. She didn't care of the pain on her left hand, she took the



pain. She sat on the floor and hugged her knees. She cried and cried. She heard another



voice. She looked over and saw a bottle of sleeping pills and RUM. They sounded nice to



her. ¨come on sweetheart take us. We'll take the pain away. We wont hurt you. We're your



friendsssss....¨



She smiled at them and opened the pill bottle. She took one... two... How about three?



hmmm Three more? Why not. A sip of RUM... No how about a gulp.... Ohh just take all



the pills and drink all the bottle like there's no tomorrow...............







A few mins. later she felt dizzy.... she didn't know where she was..... She felt really



tired... every thing was blurry... ¨Just a nap... its wont hurt...¨ she thought to her



self... She was doozing off... ¨Nicky?¨ she heard a male voice say... it sounded far...



it came from the other side of the door ¨Nicky?? Where the fuck are you?¨ She heard him



say her name and then she heard nothing... it was quiet.. she was sleeping... like a



baby.........







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¨Nicky why do you take so long in the bathroom? Are you masterbating? hahahahahaheh...¨



............................ ¨Nicky?¨....... ¨Nicky?!¨ he was worried now. ¨Nicky open



the damn door now!!¨ she didn't open the door... ¨Damn Nicky stop it im not playing....



please talk to me!!¨ He panicked. He grabbed her bag and found a plactic card. He used it



to open the door.........



¨OMG!!!!!!!¨ he shouted at the site of his friend on the floor with  shattered glass and



blood all over the floor. He grabbed her and shooked her. ¨Nicky!!???¨ She was like a rag



doll. He saw the empty bottles. ¨NO!! YOU IDIOT!!!¨ He checked for her pulse. There was a



chance to safe her. He ran to the phone and dieled 9.1.1.... It only took 10 mins to get



there but for him it felt like forever.





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They ran threw the E.R. ¨We need to pump her stomic to take them out!¨ shouted the docter.



¨Look son you need to stay here we will take care of this.¨ they told him. His other



friend ran to him. She hugged him and they both cried. They were only 14 and already they



felt like it was the end for them.







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Nicky woke up in a wierd place. It was a room with a strong white light. She was



confused. ¨Am I in heaven or hell?¨ she said out loud to her self... ¨Niether¨ she heard



a strong male voice say. She saw two men walking to her. she couldn't see their faces but



the one on the right wore white and his skin was pail and the one on the left wore black



and his skin reddish ...



¨Nicky...¨ the one on the right started. ¨ I am GOD¨ 'AND' the one on the left siad 'I AM



THE DEVIL' , 'WE BOTH AGREED TO TEAM UP' continued Devil... ¨My child you have murdered



your self and disobeyed me. But you will go back to earth. you are only 13 years old. You



haven't lived life yet...¨ GOD finished. 'BUT ON YOUR 18TH BIRTHDAY YOU WONT LIVE LIKE



OTHERS.. YOU'LL BE DEAD BUT WALKING... YOU'LL BE THE SAVIOR FOR SOME POEPLE IN MY WORLD.'



Finished the DEVIL. She looked at them. She had no words to say. DEVIL took out a bracelet



and gave it to GOD. He wispered something to the bracelet. ¨Here take this bracelet it will



help you when the time comes.¨  She grabed the bracelet she tried to put it on but the they



both started ¨'YoU WiLl Go BaCk AnD bE tHe SaViOr'¨ as they said this they both reached out a



hand and pushed her. She fell and fell. She saw her body on a hospital bed. She fell on   



herself.....







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Nicky gasped for air and looked at the time. It was only 4 AM.. ¨ What a nightmare¨ She told



her self. ¨hmm I'm not tired anymore. I'll just get up and watch t.v. then get ready for



school¨ She got up and went to the couch. ¨lets see whats on... oooo Fairy tail is on =)¨



after a few mins. she looked at the time.. It was 5 now... ¨darn time to shower and get



ready..¨ by 6 she was ready KNOCK KNCOK she opened her room door to see her best friend there.



¨Hey Brandon¨ she said with a smile ¨Sup¨ he said chearfuly. ¨lets go¨ she said grabbing her



bag..



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Nicky and Brandon both lived in the same foster house since they were 7. They became friends



but after Nicky tried to commit suicide 5 years ago they became best friends. He cared for



her and never let her out of his sight. They knew every thing from each other. (Well except



the whole god and devil thing Nicky drempt of in her comma. She knew it was real becuase when



she woke up she had the bracelet on. She never took it off.)









Nicky was a geek in math and was considered one of the guys. Most of the guys teased her for



her love of anime, zombies and tumblr. oh and homestuck. even though she was pretty no guy



has ever asked her out. She guessed its becuase she was always with Brandon and he was a cute



guy. He was tall and had a nice Fit body. His eyes were to die for and also his smile



Most poeple thought they were a perfect couple. All the girls hated Nicky for that. They all



wanted him but he didn't like the girls at his school. ¨They are all sluts.¨ He would tell



Nicky and Mira and his guy friends. But Nicky and Mira knew the real reason why. He loved



someone but it was a secret. The girls knew the person he loved and also knew that person



loved Brandon back thats why they've been together for 2 years. No one knew this love except



for them. Brandon would always tell the girls his hot sex with his love. He would always buy



stuff for his love. He was really in love. Nicky was happy for her best friend.........





Ohh did I mention that Brandon the hot sexy boy that all the girls love and want to have hard



sex with (except for nicky and mira)is actualy gay... I didn't?.. ooops well now you know ;)...
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