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Rated: 13+ · Fiction · Death · #1329572
Eight friends went camping until it went from fun to deadly.

"Oh God please help me," whispered a man while he was running toward the woods holding to his bloody arm. He looked back and saw a shadow going though the trees. The man look forward again he saw lights of a cabin
About hundred yards away as he got closer and closer to the cabin when he got ten yards away form the cabin. A man with brown hair and brown eyes came out with a musket aimed right at him .The brown haired man yelled "Stop where you are and tell me how you are!" The man screamed “Help me oh please" At this time a blade went though the man's chest. The brown haired man fires his musket as he screamed “dies fowl demon AHHHHHHHHHH!" Ring! “Hey JJ wake up” said a woman with all black on “Ok Sam I’m up, I’m up" whispered JJ. The two girls are just walking down the hallway of there high school to there lockers were three boys what in for them one of the boy had slipknot shirt and dragon ring on. Sam ran up to that one boy and hugged him Sam said “Hey baby”. The boy said “Hey” as JJ walk to the other two boy she look at Sam and the boy said “hi Luke” thin she like at the other two boy one was heavy set African American kid and the other boy had dye blue hair she can see that his root color is red. JJ stood there for a sec and said from the heavy set kid to blue headed kid “hey Tommy.” Hey Thunder” both boys said hey thin Tommy ask” So JJ are ready for collage” JJ replies yes I’ am but I will miss all of you.” All of them walk out the door of the school when they got to the school packing lot they saw a real nice car and two girls sitting on the hood of it both girls had a tan pick and the same outfit the two girls had a sliver necklaces one of the girl’s necklace read rose and the other read DD.
“Hello ladies” Thunder geared the two girls but the to women walk right by him and right to Tommy “Hey Tommy” the two girls had said with big smiles on their faces one of the girls started rubbing Tommy’s leg until JJ yelled “You bitch leave him” she was stop right what she going to say when she saw Tommy shake his head side to side at that time the rose said” See he enjoy it.” “No” said Tommy “I just want to call you that myself.” Rose marched back and acted like a little girl that dos not get her way.
DD ask “Hey Thunder did you tell them.” Tell them what? “Replied Thunder “Yeah tell us what?” ask Sam Then DD give Thunder a weird look like you what “Oh ok I remember said thunder with his eyebrow up you remember what?” Ask Luke “Jack told me to tell you guy he will meet us at big oak tree we will know which one. Thunder says, “Ok let’s go!” JJ says “Come on baby.” Luke tells Sam as she was getting on the motorcycle and drove away. Thunder drove in his red slog bug, DD got in her car and started the car “JJ you need a ride “No leave the slut her! Demanded Rose in that Tommy drove up behind them and got out “that ok ladies JJ is riding with me.” As he step next to while he put his hand on her shoulder DD nod her head and said ok and drove off then JJ and Tommy got in to Tommy's car drove for ten min until they got to a very big tree JJ and Tommy got there everyone was sitting down waiting for Jack
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