Genesis Class Lesson 2B

1. I read the book yesterday evening after dinner.
Complete sentence

2. While reading the book yesterday evening after dinner.
Incomplete sentence
Revised
While reading the book yesterday evening after dinner, I enjoyed a cup of herbal tea.

3. There is the car which ran into me on the street.
Complete sentence

4. Which ran into me on the street.
Incomplete sentence
Revised
A drunk was driving the car which ran into me on the street.

5. For example, that man over there.
Incomplete sentence
Revised
Some people dress exceptionally well; for example, that man over there.

6. The woman who talked to you in the corridor is my English professor.
Complete sentence

7. Who talked to me in the corridor.
Incomplete sentence
Revised
The man who talked to me in the corridor yesterday detests poetry.

8. Who talked to you in the corridor?
Complete question

9. Considering all the factors in this case, I think that he is guilty.
Complete sentence

10. Considering all the factors in this case.
Incomplete sentence
Revised
Considering all the factors in this case, the jury should have come to a verdict by now.

11. That he is guilty.
Incomplete sentence
Revised
Most people are convinced that he is guilty.

12. Which was a stupid thing to do.
Incomplete sentence
Revised
He was driving drunk which was a stupid thing to do.

13. Consuming illegal drugs can be very risky. Especially hard drugs like heroin or crack cocaine.
One sentence that should not be broken into two.
Revised
Consuming illegal drugs can be very risky, especially hard drugs like heroin or crack cocaine.