Please critique this - be as harsh as you want, I won't take it personally. |
When I was younger I would sit Picking daisies on my lawn And I would make a daisy chain Picking the weeds until they'd gone. I strung the chains around my neck And wore them with such glee I never would've dreamt those days Would fade away so quickly. The daisies became trampled on My interest went away All I'd do was sit inside On summer "daisy chain" days. Then a wind came in and shook the daisies And nearly blew me over I thought it was my lucky day Like I had found a four-leaved clover. I picked the daisies one more time But now I tore them up Picking the daisies to decide Do you like me, do you not? My daisy chains because destroyed All the play a game The silly act of asking daisies What I couldn't figure out in my brain. Then you went away like daisy days And it all just felt so pointless Whar are daisy chains and love In a world that's just so serious? It felt to silly to feel like that But I knew I really liked you I knew I'd never see you again But part of me really wanted to. I still pluck the petals one by one All the time with one thought And as I wish I also chant "He loves me, or he loves me not." And if my prayers get answered And I wish on daisy chains Then maybe, if I am lucky I might just see you again. |