Ztira's (ztira) Reviews

Ztira

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8 Public Reviews Given

8 Total Reviews Given

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#4223768

Review of Exhausting List of ?s about Characters

Review by Ztira

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hello Storm from Nowhere,

Thank you very much for your character sheets. They are very helpful and I was looking for something like this.

So here are 5 stars for the big help.

Have a nice day,

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#4221841

Review of Mothers and Fathers

Review by Ztira

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Hello aria,

A beatiful message, maybe not so poetic, but it's still effective.

Write on,

Ztira.

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#4174105

Review of The Happiness Experiment

Review by Ztira

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Hey DJ,

I found your text very unusual. It's special because you speak of your own ideas, in this case your happiness. "This is hard. Searching for happiness.". And I agree with it, but the question is why do you want to be happy. ;)

Best regards,

Ztira

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#4174020

Review of The Best Story!!!!!!

Review by Ztira

Rated: E

| (2.5)

Hey confusedpete34,

I'm reviewing your werid story :

TROLOLOLOLOOOOOLOOOOOOOOOOOOL !!! YAYYAYAYAYAYAY AGAGAGAGAGAGAG §§§§§§§§!!!!!YHHEYEYYYY !!!!!!!!!! Are you okay ?
Yes ?
POTATOOOOOOOOOES !!!!!! WHOOOOOOO WAAAAAAANTS POTATOES ???????
You want ?
YOU WANT ?
FAOIFJODFJOAMFJMEFJOAJOFMOFA

Best regards, write on.

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#4173400

Review of Morning at the Beach

Review by Ztira

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hello Curious Traveler,
I find your text very relaxing. You sit down on a bench, and you simply describe what is going on around you. A good point too is that you describe things well, and I can easily imagine the ambience in my little head.
It was a good experience.

Have a good day/night, write on !

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#4173223

Review of Mr Rabbit & Mr Wolf - The Witch

Review by Ztira

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hello C.A. Miller i,

I picked your story to review, I was searching random texts and I stopped at yours, because the first impression that I received, is that your story is well formated (it's lighten, and it's not a pain for the eyes).
After, I liked the end, when you tell that the woman maybe is not a witch, and we can suppose that she used her wand just to scare the wolf.
Also, the story has awaken my curiosity until the end, and it's a very good point.

The only hiccup marked, is the beginning of the story.
For me, the discussion between the rabbit and the wolf has no sense in the story, it seems to be here just to extend the store.
However, it's just my opinion, and maybe (after have seen the title) it's a serie, so maybe you had to link the rabbit to the story...

Good story anyway.

Don't stop, and write on.

P.S. : Sorry for my poor english.