Sounds like you are a blogger by the way you wrote that. If not, then I think you should give it a try. It shows that you havn't been on in a while that makes me wonder if you just moved on to other things.
It did make me smile although the umbilical cord part made me cringe a lil...hehe sorry still am only fourteen after all. I espicially liked how the part of a lifetime full of wonder. The sad part is most of the stuff that the parents do or that is so wonderful fades with time or is forgotten with age. Some things you still remember but you don't remember them you remember what seems to be dreams of dreams of them.
I liked the poem, even though I'm not a fan of babies I love kids. :)
Admitted I got lost some in the middle, towards the end I got back into it though.
I've never attempted longer poetry, I admire that.
Sorry about how scattered this review is and it doesn't really cover everything that it is supposed to as far as the little guidlines to great reviewing says.
I really just liked the poem and it makes me want to get my grades up so I get those free games!
Even though I'm kindof horrible at it atleast I try though and know my curve.
Is the first line of the 8th Stanza supposed to be "would" or Is it supposed to be world by any chance? Ps. I liked this poem I try my hand at poetry sometimes to although I am not so good at it. A nice poem title could be "Miss the world? Or let die." Stupid title as well lol sorry for the waste of your time.
Interesting, I think that would be cool if you got it into your literary magazine. I hae submitted some of my own poetry to one as well never gotten picked though lol. Did the girl kill him I thought she did but now I am confused that sounds like something that would be in a scary movie or thriller or something of the sort.
I want to be an author when I'm older but I know I will also need another job so that I can pay bills/ just have money in general. Plus college is expensive if I can't get a scholarship.So writing but also something else for expenses and more...Savings I guess. (Ps. Good Idea for a poll) ~Hale
I enjoyed this, the picture was allright..I liked how you used the green to make it artistic looking as well as fed the mind with the piece itself it all flowed unlike this review. ~Hale
Ha-ha Ah that''s wonderful, brilliant. I see why you would get something for this I'm suprised I havn't heard of it before I must say this ROFL, LOL, WTFFLOL ( what the flying fish lol). Too Good-grin- I can't stop laughing/smiling about this ^_^. ~Hale -laughing like crazy.-
I'm sorry you are gone. I enjoyed the piece. Kindof depressing the ones we love are the ones who know how to hurt us the most. But then that's only to be expected after all they know about you and about the real you. Well some of them do anyway, great poem. ~Hale
Wow....Such a great story better than a story but still. I mean just wow the thought of cats being like that is amazing I suppose it's sad in a way yet creative and interesting. Wonder if there really is some truth to the 9 lives thing had to start somewhere right? -smiles- Great story hope Jack is allright though. wonder if the mom is a human...hmmm
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