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Review of Honesty  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the word choice and emotion. Skin, hazel, iris, vacuous, adjust, hallucinogen, laced, craving, inhale, ingest, reality, tingle, exuberate/exuberance, goose bumps, shivers, pleasure, frustration, honesty. Just about every other word hits hard and sinks in. The emotion is obviously strong and I really love this piece. Wonderful work!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow. I love the ending! The irony is awesome. Each person gets what they deserve in the end. Fabulous!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. You used some really wonderful poetic devices like the alliteration in the 2nd to last line. I love the rhyming pattern. Great work!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Cheater  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem has a very strange but captivating structure. It's abstract but still gets the point across. Great work!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of The Cheater  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. THis poem is short but it has a hard impact. Your word choice is enthralling. Wringing, vexing, shifty, paranoid, wild, beast, lust, aimless, defying, crashing, forbidden, crawling, sobbing.
My favorite line is "Closing two dorrs and breaking three hearts." Wow!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the way you told a story in a poem. It's a way to let out a sad story in a flowing and deep way. It can really enter the soul and make the reader appreciate the meaning more. Astounding!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Cheater  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this. It sees like a free form rant but that honestly can let out the emotions best. Rant until you can't speak anymore and believe me you will feel so much better. Excellent work!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of You  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love how blunt this work is. You understand that your hatred isn't just for her, but for yourself and that you hate her for making you hate yourself. I love blunt, straight-to-the-point things. Great job!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Headlights  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem has a lot of emotion in it. You've done excellent at getting it emotional but not whiny. I love the way it flows and rhymes. I love poems that rhyme but it can be hard to rhyme without using standard rhyming words. Excellent work!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Siren Song  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow. That is some really good writing. Each of your characters seems really well developed, like you actually know them and have worked on them for a long time. Awesome job!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of The Cold  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That is extremely funny and yet disturbing. I like it. Excellent work!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
That's so cute! I love it!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me laugh! You scold yourself without being mean or ruining your self esteem. I love that!
Excellent job!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Boston Poem  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love your word choice in this piece!
Strung, hammered, vulgar, strumming, numb, lettered.
You're really good at picking the right words.
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Questions...  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can understand your feelings here. I know that it can cause so many questions and so much pain. Writing is really the only way to get it out. Great job!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Untitled  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are an amazing writer. If you ever need help editing let me know, I'd be glad to help! Thanks so much for reviewing me. I love the way your words form together in such beautiful pieces. This one has a lot of great phrases. I love it!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Why did I try...  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I totally know what you're going through! When I was cheated on all I could see was my (ex) boyfriend and the other girl all over each other every time I closed my eyes. It hurts to know that you can't hate them because you love them. And you feel violent and angry and yet you still kind of want them to be happy in the end. The passion and anger fuse and bubble but they die out so quickly you know you'll regret any rash action. It's really wonderful writing, I can feel every line.
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of Things  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You were very creative with your rhyming. And I like that the theme would normally seem vague to most people, but you've managed to breathe life into it. Once again, excellent writing!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Break ups suck! That is really all there is to say about it that doesn't involve a bunch of horribly inappropriate words. Like you said, they can generate a lot of feelings good for poetry and other writing an it definitely shows. You did a really good job with this one.
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem!
Especially-
"Colours mixed,
Colours aligned,
Colours that are hard to find."
You are an excellent poet, I'm excited to read more of your material!
Thanks again for reviewing my work, much appreciated!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review of My Best Friend.  Open in new Window.
Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love this poem, especially the end! I could relate to a lot of it with my best friend (yes, he is my boyfriend) but the fact that you're best friend is beer and that you decided to hit that in at the end made a really good impact and added a lighter mood to a happy but serious subject.
Thank you so much for reviewing my poems!
Keep writing!
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this! The perspective of the household cat was refreshing and as always your writing style and word choice are what I would call delectable. I love your writing! The ending was so cute and sweet!
Keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I wish I could read Polish!
But I love the emotion and word choice here. You have a real gift, don't ever stop using it!
Please keep writing!
G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh my God that made me laugh so hard! It's so true too! So many people just want GP's so they write random stuff and don't know what they're talking about. It makes me want to shove a banana up their nose!
Excellent work! Don't ever stop writing!

G.L.
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Review by Garwynn Lang Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You have a really unique writing style and fabulous word choice. I got a good laugh out of this and your characters are very defined. Excellent work!
Write on!
G.L.
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