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Review by Butterfly Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The poll is nice but I do think there should be some more fetishes. Judging by the results, it seems like a lot of people had to choose 'none of these' since their fetish wasn't added. Adding more may give more people the ability to feel included. Not saying you have to considering this might be an old poll.
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Review of FNAF new story  Open in new Window.
Review by Butterfly Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was really interesting to do. I did several of the routes and I wished that there were more options for some of the characters, but I know that my limited choices are likely from me not being a paid member. I really liked the options in the original game category, so kudos to the ones who made the chapters.
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Review by Butterfly Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was beautifully written! The words flowed nicely and told a story within the poem without the need for too many details about the characters. The way the narrator described the girl they (I dont want to assume genders) wished to kiss as well as the emotions they felt towards her allowed me to understand and connect with the poem.


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Review of Oneka: Chapter 1  Open in new Window.
Review by Butterfly Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well written with fine detail. I appreciate the length of the chapter as it provided the necessary topics. However, the grammar needs a bit of improvement. There are some (not too many) grammatical mistakes but they're minor (such as placing a comma in the wrong spot). I look forward to reading more.


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Review of With Love  Open in new Window.
Review by Butterfly Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was well written. The way the story flowed and gave some detail about both characters while also keeping parts vague really pulled me, as a reader, into the story. I was able to connect with the narrator, feeling their sadness from their best friend dying as well as the longing for Harry to return.


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