Deborn Luzer's (writist1) Reviews

Deborn Luzer

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#2584835

Review of A Fish Out of Water

Review by Deborn Luzer

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

I know. I do all of my music buying online. That way I can browse without all of the looks. Maybe next you could go over to the computer games section and look for a Nintendo with the Mario brothers. By the time I read the instructions on some of the games they have now I'm too tired to play it, even if I understood it, which I don't. When I go in a mall that has a music store I cross over to the other side. DL

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#2584833

Review of If I Had It To Do Over

Review by Deborn Luzer

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

I have to say, that is one experience that I have never had a desire to watch. I was perfectly content to sit outside like your husband wanted and wait to be called, especially since it took six hours for my daughter to be born Great descriptive writing. DL

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#2583751

Review of Introduction

Review by Deborn Luzer

Rated: E

| (1.5)

Seems to me you've already got a good start by doing what you did, ask. My first writing disappeared after I submitted it. It took me forever to even find it and, when I did, it was definitely in the wrong place from where I wanted it. It gets simpler. Just select "writing", whatever type of writing you want to do, title it, rate it, and write it. Depending on the type of writing it is is determined by what you decide to call it, such as Static Item, Book, Fiction, Non-fiction, etc. Then scroll down and submit it. Wehen you go to look for it, just select "reading" and choose what you called it. I hope this helps. DL

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#2579395

Review of My Husband is a Poor Winner (Revised)

Review by Deborn Luzer

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Fortunately all men are not like that. Take me for example, I used to be conceited but I finally took care of that and now I don't have any faults. DL

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#2579387

Review of Lost - One Memory

Review by Deborn Luzer

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Great! I used to think I could grocery shop without a list. When I got to the store I would try to remember what I went for (razor blades). Usually I would remember milk and bread and end up with two or three gallons of milk and lots of loaves of bread and no razor blades. DL

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#2578474

Review of Tree Fairies

Review by Deborn Luzer

Rated: E

| (4.0)

The punctutation needs some work but overall it is a great story. I couldn't imagine why the fairies all of a sudden decided to live in the trees. Keep up the imagination. Deborn

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#2305544

Review of 'Middle-age Spread' is NOT a Condiment

Review by Deborn Luzer

Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

Hi,
Enjoyed your article. I surely know about those final few pounds being so persistent. My trick is to set my goal at a number that is actually ten pounds less than I want to get to so if I can get within five pounds of it, I'm five pounds ahead of reality. Dumb, but it works. Keep up the good writing and the results scoring. DeBorn Luzer

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#1983100

Review of Promoting Your Portfolio URL

Review by Deborn Luzer

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Really good information. I'm really new to this endeavor (1week) and I need all the information I can get. I do have a website featuring my artwork and I hadn't even considered linking from it. I'm going to give it a try. Thanks. DeBorn