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Review of My choices  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
These are the same questions everyone has to ask themselves.
I like how it was in red. Red is a very emotional color.
Good poem
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Review of Breath By Breath  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like the wording you use and the way it's written.
And i like how you repeat the title and the breath by breathe through out the poem.
Does the breath by breath symbolize the day that each day passed?
Before reading the last part i had a sense that it was about a war.

Good poem, sorry for your loss
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Review of Swing Set  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I Like the imagery in this, like the moon above and the earth down below. I can picture and father and daughter swinging on a swing set.
You can really see the love between the daughter and her father. This poem symbolizes the real father daughter bonding.
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Review of The Outsider  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this poem.
With the detail and the wording I can really feel how the person in this poem.

I like the metaphor of standing outside of the glass looking in. It's like who sometimes you feel that that everyones ignoreing you and doesnt care.

Good poem.
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Review by I Go Hard Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I can really relate to this.
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Review of Siren song  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Like the rhyming, it doesn't lead the poem it goes well with it all. And i like the choice of words used in this.
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Review by I Go Hard Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
You can really feel how the person in the poem feels. It didn't seem that you over explained it, i think it was just enough. Because you dont want to over do it with detail, and just go on and on. I do have one question about it, is the person talking are they a ghost? And they are just reflecting back on their life?

A thing i liked about this is after each line you would put a dash, and that made it feel like it was hard to say and just like you were saying it to their face.
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