Your message is one that all writers wish, just to write and be read, it is a heavy burden we put upon ourselves. Each time we write it is a shot in the dark, just write, write for yourself, write for the joy of writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Hi, I like both versions of the Roundel poem, very well written, rhyming is great, the theme is wonderful, I like a poem with repeating line, I think I have written this form before , but will have to try one again ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Mike, I love your haiku, so beautifully penned and so spiritual, well done. Perhaps you could read some of my poetry ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Properous, you have penned a beautiful spiritual Diamante poem. I have written some in the past and they can be quite tricky but yours is perfect, perhaps you can read some of my poetry ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Your poem reads wonderful, your fears are dripping from each word, and from your beautifully penned lines. I like your poem and read it several times and each time I liked it more ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Ken, I found your poem emotional, oh life is full of memory and regret for each of us, your poem touched me deeply. I love the Etheree form you selected, it is so flexible to so many themes, the possibilities are endless, I have used this form also with great success in the past, you have inspired me to write another ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Zeke, I read your bio and I am so sorry to hear you had a serious stroke and can no longer write. That is a hard for a poet to accept. I have read your poem Aloneness and find it very emotional and it touched my heart deeply. It is skillfully written and you should be very proud of it ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Bluebird, I can relate to your poem, I hold a lot of sorrow in my heart too, and no matter how much I write about it, the pain never goes away. I suppose we must carry it till we take our last breath, I know that sounds terrible to say, but I think you know what I mean_Constance
You have penned an excellent Villanelle poem, no wonder it won a Quill Award. You made the fighting scene so real and horrible. It must have been so awful for the soldiers in that battle, I cannot image the death and suffering it created, the bravery of those men were brought to life with your words, very well written, be proud of your poem. Well done.
Hi, I really enjoyed your poem, to me it spoke of courage, you have finally arrived in a good place, where you answer to no one, can be yourself, no matter what anyone says, I feel I am in that place too, it was a long journey, with lots of deep valleys and mazes and twists and turns, I have had to let a lot of negative people go, but wow, I am where, you describe, and it is awesome, well done !
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