your sonnets are quite good in meaning but, if you want to write a real sonnet, you should not just follow the rule of it, having 14 lines. you see, in sonnet writing, there are some rules to follow.. first, there should be 14 lines(that's a check for you).. next, it should have iambic pentameter wherein each line has 10 syllables.. strictly 10 syllables.. last, it should have 3 quatrains and a rythmic couplet, following the rythmic pattern : ABABCDCDEFEFGG.. but i understand. it's really hard to compose sonnets which follows all the rules.. but as you can see, if you do not follow a rule in writing sonnets, your composition has no right to be called a sonnet, but only a short poem.. but again, the meaning of your poem is Good! good luck in writing more sonnets!! and if you have any questions, just ask me.. kay? haha..:p
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